Ono no Komachi, KKS:635, IM:143 (Love)
The autumn night
is long only in name --
We've done no more
than gaze at each other
and it's already dawn.
(Tr. Hirshfield & Aratani)
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This autumn night
Was long in name alone,
For scarcely had we met
When daylight appeared
Leaving everything unsaid.
(Tr. Helen Craig McCullough)
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The IM preface says: "Once a man was about to start for home after visiting a lady. How short,
he thought, even the long nights of autumn sometimes seem. He recited:"
(Tr. Helen Craig McCullough)
I prefer the erotically charged version by Hirshfield & Aratani. |
